Voice & Witness
The Contemporary Story
Three stories that widen the form — through music, through a mother’s litany, through the blurred line between memory and invention.
10
1957
Sonny’s Blues
James Baldwin
A Harlem schoolteacher learns his younger brother has been arrested for heroin, and the story that follows — told entirely in the older brother’s guarded, self-justifying voice — moves toward a jazz club where Sonny, at the piano, finally says everything he could never say in words. The closing set piece, where music becomes the only adequate language for suffering, is one of the great endings in American fiction.
What Students Can LearnA narrator’s limitations can be the subject of the story. Baldwin lets the older brother’s fear and respectability color every judgment he makes about Sonny, so readers have to read past the narrator to understand what he still can’t admit. Point of view is characterization.
Still under copyright — find it in Going to Meet the Man or your library’s collection.
11
1978
Girl
Jamaica Kincaid
In a single unbroken paragraph — almost entirely one long, cascading sentence — a mother instructs her daughter in everything from washing clothes to walking like a lady to, unmistakably, not becoming “the slut you are so bent on becoming.” The daughter gets in only two brief interruptions. Kincaid compresses an entire coming-of-age, and an entire inherited anxiety about womanhood, into two pages.
What Students Can LearnForm can be the argument. The relentless, comma-spliced sentence structure enacts the mother’s control before the reader consciously registers it. When a story’s subject is pressure or inheritance, consider making the sentence itself feel that pressure.
Still under copyright — find it in At the Bottom of the River or your library’s collection.
12
1990
The Things They Carried
Tim O’Brien
A platoon in Vietnam is defined, almost taxonomically, by the objects each soldier carries — rations and rifles alongside letters, photographs, and superstitions — until the inventory becomes a devastating account of grief, guilt, and the impossible weight of memory itself. O’Brien’s narrator repeatedly reminds readers that “story-truth” can be truer than “happening-truth,” turning the story into an argument about fiction itself.
What Students Can LearnA concrete list, deployed with discipline, can carry abstraction better than any direct statement of theme. O’Brien also models metafiction for beginners: a narrator can question his own reliability without collapsing the story’s emotional truth.
Still under copyright — find it in The Things They Carried or your library’s collection.